This came out really quite accomplished. I can see you challenging yourself with a lot of difficult subjects and technical approaches, but it really coheres. There are a lot of character drawings that express form quite excellently. There's a good sense of depicting what's necessary and not overloading the setting. It feels like a nice midpoint between Tomino-isms and OVA spartan-ness. I don't know how you did it, but I think the space is expressed quite well despite you having not broken your back in overdetailing the backgrounds. Overall, really nice job.